In Charity

They know, I feel...I mean I think

when language deprives

emotion of expression

and notion of nuance

as it sometimes, often does

 

I play a game with words

and let them catch my meaning

and write my song

 

I have a feeling

sometimes

 

they know I’m  

a destitute child

and in charity

just play along

Reviews

[Lily Mae]

Wordplay is unique to each of us..it pulls those inner strings and unravels into mysterious writings but we know..we always smile at the musings of the wordplay :) xo

[Kaya]

This is so cleverly written, I love this!!

[patricia]

aw I liked the idea behind this a lot. I liked the feeling of all this. Great write.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

"when language deprives
emotion of expression" ~It often does get deprived when we are unable to express ourselves fluently. However, your wordplay makes it an alluring game for my mind to decipher...It's short and sweet, yet fully expressed, and fun to play (not charity at all)...very clever.

[†Tracey†]

Words play well... or a sign that says' "Words at Play" ..that would be fun lol.. Well written. I love it.

[Emily B]

games of words - seems to be a local phenomenon today :)

[Leslie Philibert]

This is a fine poem that says a lot in a few powerful lines, good writing.

[Renée]

( : Tricky one you are..love this one! At least in my twisted mind It works q :

[Ed Hart]

i know the current in this river

[J. J. Nightingale]

Not quite sure I understand dear .. ... I tried ..


Jasmine :)