Flocking

words cold

find no meaning

in my mind

 

blood runs hot

in the heart

and

this flock

of words

will now fly

to warmer sky

Reviews

[shythatway]

Had to read this several times. I think we all want to fly. No, i know we do.

[MuSe Ampoule]

Interesting analogy for an argument. But it's true, isn't it? When we fight we flee from the aggressor looking for sympathy, a warm place to lick our wounds. Very good write.

[J.M]

Short but ingenious - you soar - hope you find those warmer skies.

[Alicante lullaby]

flight..we saw it...

[Linear]

Flocking good show i say, wish we could all sail away to warmer climbs

[SpokenWord]

This poem reminds me of writers block that is freed by a muse to fly into reality.

[Robin]

follow your compass ... and thermometer

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. wow ... one of my favourites from you ... utterly spectacular ... plus ... i always agree with my best buddy and coach ...

[TAO]

A wandering wonderer; forgive me if I am wrong about this, but I should liken you to a planet without a star seeking a new solar system with a decent "Goldilocks Zone" to call home. This is my impression. You have yet to fail to awe, Wondering Mind.

[InkSlinger]

the wandering of the mind always impress me.. you always soar where only eagles dare to fly.. well done..