Flocking

words cold

find no meaning

in my mind

 

blood runs hot

in the heart

and

this flock

of words

will now fly

to warmer sky

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

i guess words have no meaning and cold until you put passion into it. the words are there they just need to be put into verse.

[paul]

this could be looked at in many ways.

[Bertie]

An intriguing concept and your use of temperature works wonderfully...
I can admit that the specific meaning escapes me, but you've certainly triggered an emotional response in me which is what poetry is all about.
Thank you, and well done :)

[April Child]

Very nice image you create here.

[ForTheWorld]

this is lovely, i love the poem so much =D..you're really an amazing writer.. =D

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This was beautiful! i liked it!

[Norma M Sutton]

I like this.

[JelliFyshKissUs]

And I am the wind beneath your wings ;)

[Jasmine]

wonderful... warmth will come again. we just need to wait a while.

[:)]

This is beautiful :)

And so let it fly and this to pass :)

You are such a wonderful writer, I hope you know... :)