The Fall

head first down I went

I tripped, and she helped me up

I fell in her love

Author's Note

Prompt: So you're tapping down the street, just having a think, and you trip over some object you didn't see. As you sit on the ground (though it's just your pride that is hurt) somebody helps you up

Reviews

[Unspoken poet]

this is such a wonderful, beautiful write. much enjoyed this

[Closedown]

Oh so very sweet! I love it, well done. Renfieldians unite!

[em]

his love fell on her
crushed was she and hushed he was
hurt pride and some more

- this is really lovely!!! - plus - i agree with serah - thou art sweetness - known by another name - wondering mind!!! -

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. oh, this is adorable ... sweetness thou art also known by the name of wondering mind ... but what if ... :) ...

she tripped me and how
i fell in love as i fell
gravity loves love