Escape To Reality

relax your brain

release your mind

there’s nothing

you can really find

It’s all an illusion

lost in confusion

Just the blind

leading the blind

Author's Note

what is real and what is fantasy is lost on the fringes between sense and emotion

Reviews

[Inkcognito]

Too true..reality, it seems, sometimes is nothing but an illusion alive within the fantastical galaxy that rules our dreams, emotions and ultimately, our minds! Utterly confusing at times... A profound write, striking in simplicity!

[Kristin Reynolds]

oh yes it is, all quite an illusion. we are ghosts walking among ghosts; sleepwalkers. lovely--and thanks for being the first to read my poetry, it's awful being the newbie! :)

[Helen Crutchett]

"relax your brain
release your mind
there’s nothing
you can really find"

Interesting little write. The brain has a mind of its own, no matter how we try to 'train' it. Sometimes there is nothing I can really find in mine LOL! Enjoyed this.

[What happened to simple..]

mm love the playful truth =) xx

[Liza]

escape to reality - great title!
usually we all escape from reality!
this is a wonderful perception shift to be present; to the gift of now.

[Ed Hart]

we write what we know

[.]

am reminded of
the pied piper of hamlyn
i'm following blind

[Robin]

the blind seem to listen very well ..

[TAO]

what is real, though? Your poem makes some good points, and leads to some very vexing questions. Your author's note doesn't help any, or rather, it helps the questions... Very well done, Wondering Mind.