I Tried

I Tried

A Chapter by Wondering Mind
"

Team Renfield

"

I really tried to write

This Renfield prompt

 

But my many efforts

Were with scare stomped

 

Fright cruelly fought me

With hard punching fists

 

How will I find my phobia

If I have a fear of lists?



© 2011 Wondering Mind


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I love this, A fear of lists... really intriguing write here, This is so well written and said.......

Posted 5 Years Ago


an amusing and interesting way to overcome writer's block. Although, you have repeated "fear". Perhaps you could exchange it for something else...?

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Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the last line so much. A fear of lists. This is a great unexpected ending.

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Posted 13 Years Ago


Awesome :)
Peace
Robin

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Posted 14 Years Ago


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. haha! ... for some people it's lists and for some people it's lisps ... for me it's both so i prefer a packet of crisps ...

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Posted 14 Years Ago


Hahaha! Very clever! Renfieldians unite!

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very nice. haha. This one is sharp as a tack.

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Posted 14 Years Ago


Haha

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