My Elements

what halo did

presumption

point to, in praise

of my sainthood?

 

 

I am all of Earth’s

passion made,

man molded

time taint

 

free as blowing winds

fresh as running streams

fierce as fire’s flames

a simple man

no angel,

no saint

Reviews

[Pax]

just wow....

[Renée]

"Simple Perfection"

[Robbie~xoxo~]

"free as blowing winds
fresh as running streams
fierce as fire’s flames"~ I love the rhythmic flow of this stanza, along with the powerful statement made...This piece is Strong and passionate indeed!

[:)]

It still amazes me how simple and thoughtful your poems are.
No need to write anything that doesn't have to be there.

BAM!

[.]

. haha! ... ohhhhhhhhh ... well, genius lies in simplicity ... so, are you claiming to be a genius ? ... gotcha ! ... :P ...

[Robin]

its an open mind that earns you wings

[Marie Harrison]

You're your own special blend of man.

[JelliFyshKissUs]

I shall live to imitate your humility. Or is the vanity using reverse psychology? Hmm...

[Jasmine]

neither - only human.

(absolutely love this by the way!)

[Linear]

Just a man perhaps, with a free flowing mind.

Enjoyed so much, im learning thank you