Love's Pen

I will not render

sweet nothings

on the pelt

of your heart

 

These, 

I leave willingly 

to this

and that

 

My love pen

pierces passionate

penetrating

deep

drawing the ink

from love’s well

 

I will write

but

are you sure

you can recite?

Reviews

[JelliFyshKissUs]

No need to recite. Just let it flow and carry you to the deepest of cisterns until the well runs dry. Such passion these days, WM. Lovin' it.

[Jasmine]

excellent sexual connotations... haha
once again, you write exceptionally well.

[Linear]

A poem most sensually deep, a lovers heart to reach, a rythem that gently rocks, i do believe the recitation is sure to come

[Misty Blue Eyes]

dude that rocks.. i love this poem.. the flow was outstanding

[.]

. my goodness ...

you speak my soul
and etch on it
i reach my goal
bit by bit

. this is quite the rocket write ... plus ... i agree with em ...

[Marie Harrison]

It's very romantic poem to me. Very sweet poem.

[TAO]

No, they can't. Why? Because they have no idea what you're saying. At least, that's how it often feels. Well done, Wondering Mind.

[James Paulin]

My thoughts turn to love letters handwritten and scented from times long past and proper. I like the way you stimulate a mood by writing style alone.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

I LOVE THE MEANING OF THIS POEM!

[Sonya]

I really love~ "my love pen pierces passionate penetrating drawing the ink from love's well" The entire poem was lovely!