Another Year

Lady night

wears early 

black mourning

 

her sky cries 

lonely until white

shrouds the memories

 

of the passing year

Reviews

[Linear]

And the sky wears blue till summer is hue.

great poetry need not be long winded, you proved that with this

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. ahhh ... beautiful ... that lady is quite a lady ... and you wrote quite the ode ...

[Norma M Sutton]

Lovely.

[Misty Blue Eyes]

WOW that is insane.. LOVE IT....... the twist of words are really awesome

[JelliFyshKissUs]

Drape me in this poem and lull me to sleep with its words of sorrow and promise.

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[Ed Hart]

and round and round we go, along with everything else

[Marie Harrison]

Lovely "her sky cries lonely until white shrouds the memories of the passing year"
Very lovely prose.