Sorrows- Haiku

Storm wiping away

Nature wages war again

Sorrows rape my smiles

Reviews

[Unspoken poet]

wow, such a powerful imagery here, this is so good

[Mockingbird]

sorrows invade our lives sometimes when we least expect it. in the midst of our joy, sorrow finds its way into our hearts and wipes the heartfelt smiles off our faces. great haiku.

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sorrows are like that
they have so sense of nothing
wickedly they take

[Ed Hart]

sullen sky draws near
awakening my old fear
sorrow holds me dear