October Nights

North winds blow again

Lake shivers in thought of cold

October nears its end

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Visual and I felt the shiver. Nicely penned.

Chris

[Unspoken poet]

I love this write, so very good

[Pax]

winter is coming along
in the late night of November

[Jasmine]

embodies today's icy English weather very well, methinks. (although it is now November!)
A nice sense of looming change in the poem.

[.]

. yeah ... this is just too beautiful ...

[TAO]

was extremely windy today... I hate the north winds... I think it's time to immigrate to Mexico; heard it's fairly warm there. Very cold piece of work, Wondering Mind, and full ofthe foreboding of winter's arrival... Great work.

[Marie Harrison]

Brrr! very cold but good poem. Those northern winds are cold ones. I"ve felt them before! Nice poem.

Was windy here today.