Where I Want to Be

When I'm without words, I just say what comes to mind

Though I may seem

distant

at times

always

wondering

mind

       wandering

You really should know

I’m right here

where

I want to be

with you

in my heart

Author's Note

Inspired by Emily Burns' eloquent style

Reviews

[Emily B]

I keep coming back to these words. Because where I want to be isn't a real place, and I don't know how to get there from here. It's all so complicated and I just really feel so tired and old. You give me hope. And maybe one day I will be where I want to be.

[Emily B]

I love these words. And to think I have a 'style'

:)

[Emily B]

oh, oh, did I know when I read this before that I inspired the style of it? It's really wonderful inspiring work and I'm so glad to read it again.

[Dark Empress]

that's rather sweet yet subtle

[James Paulin]

Wandering, wondering minds do so well in a comfortable place, embraced, as your well chosen words convey.

[jinjahman]

subtlety to a tee. I like it

[Linear]

thats such a lovely song to sing.

[Ed Hart]

my wife is like that (when she's without words)

[...]

. stunning inspiration ... stunning words ... you have a beautiful mind and even more beautiful heart ... :) ...

[Bubo]

Such romance and true, don't we often seem distant to those we love. I liked the layout and beauty behind your words.