Free-Fall

Inspired by a write I read tonight

Love is like free-fall

Pull string before hitting ground

Avoid messy end

Author's Note

With much apology to the original write

Reviews

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. what an honour to revisit ... i didn't remember it in my conscious mind ... but i did in my subconscious mind ... eben should memorize this ...

[Mauricio Montoya]

very insightful. excellent

[Marie Harrison]

What no splat? I like this poem!

[...]

love is shangrila
and it hurts like hell sometimes
but "no pain, no gain"

lmao