Without You

The sun sinks slowly

into her sea of unknown.

Night sews stiff around

this sorrowing soul.

You loved sunsets.

Another day passes.

Cruel,

callous in his consumption 

of my cup of life..

But with every memory

the mind relives of you,

I am revived. Alive!

All the same

these moments mar my veins as they move

in every heart-beat

  without you.

Reviews

[Emily B]

the beat of my heart
aches
slow rhythms

to read words like these

[Tate Morgan]

This was welll writen I like it

[nono]

Very cute and pretty pain is only halve of love and sometimes I have the right to say that's all love is you did a nice job writing this!

[Dracon4]

I feel your pain here. I especially love the last stanza, very touching.

[Starbound25]

painful and beautiful

[Ed Hart]

when the two are one, this is bound to happen...condolences

[Cynthia]

wonderful nd beautiful!
i think ti's a kind of lonely, right?
Actually, I love this poem so much!