Maybe Tomorrow

 

Maybe tomorrow.,

But tomorrow never came.

Today, my skies

are painted.

Brushed skillfully grey with,

promises of your lies.

 

Maybe tomorrow, I tell my sorrow.

But

will I be the same?

Reviews

[Emily B]

maybe not

[Dark Empress]

Beautiful. Great poem

[paul]

yes tomorrow
is only tomorrow

and it never comes
on time
it never comes

[Bare trees]

Nicely penned, you tell the story so often told but in a well thought-out and written manner. It speaks of being lied to and the resulting wisdom that follows. Something we either learn or we don't. Through wisdom comes caution.

[Hanan_Maliah]

How you always go so deep with just a few words...simple words ...together...forming a mindset that just explodes with feeling...causing hunger to set in for the next prolific thought!

[Tori]

Wwo this is amazing. I love the ryhme pattern and everything about it!! Great great job!!