Give Peace a Chance

In memory of many

 

I remember when

sweet guitars gently wept.

Now, 

they violently bleed.

Well,

they killed that voice,

on the lonely, busy streets

of a cold, free world,

 

and

before John,

a dream died with King.

Now they sing,

"Give Peace a chance"

Author's Note

Almost 43 Years to the day since "Give Peace A Chance" was released, and we still glorify war.

Reviews

[*** Hey Jude***]

What a sad, but vividly true commentary. Flower child here < believing if every man would treat everyone as they would want to be treated there might be a chance for a peaceful world. Humanity has fought since the beginning of time, with reasonings, without reason. Thanks you for sharing the awesome YOU! ~ :-)

[Pax]

a very nice meaningful message.

[Renée]

So much to say..but I will not cloud the message..
"All we are saying"..as my hand reaches out to a new friend.. " We Have a Dream" & my voice continues to join the cry started so long ago.. " Give Peace A Chance

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is Bittersweet...a harsh world does force the guitar to play a more sullen tune of anguish...Times change and we can only reflect on the past with heartache.
"Give peace a chance"~ wonderful words of wisdom... Nicely done!

[†Tracey†]

This makes me sigh..in remembrance of the soft play of the guitar and the hope and promises and how they faded away...by harsh hands. Thank you for sharing..xo

[YouoweYoupay]

I've heard of John Lennon, never listened to his songs, until 5 minutes ago. Not really my cup of tea, but this particular one had a certain ambiance, I can't say cheerful, but strong and sincere. Personally, I think the whole idea of 'world' or even local piece is naive. However, guitars do bleed in our days! I loved this poem because it was very brief but said A LOT. And by King, I'm guessing you meant Luther? Great write. Thank you.

[Whiskurz]

True words my friend......Whisk

[luciddreamer]

Beautiful write :)
Peace
Robin

[TAO]

Was this inspired by that song "While My Guitar Gently Weeps" (don't know if that's the title, but I know I thoroughly enjoy that jones)? Well, either way, this is clever, and makes me want to pull up some old Beatles joints.

[paul]

beautiful