Dawn

The sky’s naked beauty

A mind beholds in awe

As lover Sun rises high to

Glisten dawn’s virgin dew

 

Tones of transformations

Tempting night into day

Sun slowly slides in sky

Climaxing colorful foreplay

 

Inside the beholder’s mind

Shadows dance with the rays

While space indifferent hues

Rejoice in their wild displays

 

Such beauty in the rebirth

Of life’s expression in light

After moon's secret promises

and stars sparkling bright

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

Beauty of a new sunrise.....dawn's virgin dew, and then the sky filled with sunlight! Moving past shadows to a time of the moon's secret promises results in a stirring description of a beginning to end.....full circle!
Your write is truly a lovely piece!
Sheila

[Tomás Ó C..]

Its great how you use the imagery of the beauty of natures ultimate expression of love between two people to describe the change of night into day...

[Erin]

Wow, I really like this. You were very creative in explaining the details, and it creates a good detailed image in the reader's mind. Very very well written, too. Good job!

[~Mary Ann~]

This is a very creative way of describing the dawn of a new day! I don't think I will quite look at a sunrise the same again! :p I loved the way you ended the piece.. It completes the cycle..
A wonderfully colorful piece to go with the picture and of course.. very well written! :p