Dawn

The sky’s naked beauty

A mind beholds in awe

As lover Sun rises high to

Glisten dawn’s virgin dew

 

Tones of transformations

Tempting night into day

Sun slowly slides in sky

Climaxing colorful foreplay

 

Inside the beholder’s mind

Shadows dance with the rays

While space indifferent hues

Rejoice in their wild displays

 

Such beauty in the rebirth

Of life’s expression in light

After moon's secret promises

and stars sparkling bright

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

I love the play on words in this poem. The rising and setting sun are quite spectacular to behold. In life we have to take time out to enjoy the small things and the wonder of nature. I wish I was watching the sun rise and set with you on this day for you have painted a glorious picture.

[ForTheWorld]

the hell!!! i really love this poem, hahahahah, i love the dawn most, when you can't still clearly see the view but, you could feel no danger to breathe even when the air is polluted hahaahha, I do not mean to say that the air here is polluted, but its fresher

[Ed Hart]

ain't it something...even the creatures stop and look

[Cynthia]

It's so beautiful and enjoyable!!!
I enjoy reading the whole poem, the picture it's so great na d nice.
I totally agree with other's comment, it's outstanding!

[Bee]

absolutely beautiful.. the picture it paints is like no other. this is definitely a new favorite.

[Anita B Jacques]

What I enjoy most of all, is catching the sun at day break reflecting on the ocean before it's visible in the sky. I want to transfer the vision on canvas some day.

[MagiCrystal]

You have such a romantic soul and heart...You see nature and all the splendor as an awesome harmony..
and I love this poem... can I buy it?
aw.. awesomeness..muah

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It is rewarding to see how a poet can transform something often ignored because we see it everyday and turn it into a magical, emotional work of art. I certainly appreciate your intimate reflection on one of many earthly canvases we are so blessed to experience daily. Nice work~

[Anita B Jacques]

I will never look at a sunrise my way again. beautiful poem, emotions for magic, God's paint brush is awesome. I'm glad English is your second language, if not, your words would go over my head. English is my second language also, I wish I could write half as good. Great piece, thank you for sharing.
God Bless
Anita

[Lady leah]

Another outstanding piece