Tonight (My Exodus Ends)

 

Strum gently, sweet love

On the strings of my heart

Play Cupid’s cunning tunes

With Kama’s crafty art

 

Serenade me subtle songs

Whisper to my longing ears

Let love live this moment

Forget tomorrow and yesteryears

 

Tonight, my exodus ends

At the gates of Eden I stand

And bow in humble gratitude

As I enter my promised land

Reviews

[Gandré]

Oh, you composed this with sensitiveness... and I thought, it is wonderful that you keep the roots of poetry alive, sweet cute poem. Be well. L.

[bluessadmood]

oh what wonderful words
serenade me ..sing me,your wonderful tunes
sing me with your angel voice
let me hear your sweet voice
always told me how life was worth living
you made me love my life..feel so
alive.. a life that you live in it
when you share me this moment
i forget everything ,my to morrows,my yesterdays
you mean everything to me..happiness is you
tonight my journey ends at the gates
of the sweet heavens of you
tonight i rest in your arms
as i know real pleasure and happiness is all for me
and i enter your promised lands
and i live in the warmth of your heart
fear nothing as i feel you by me
for what is left of my life
what lovely words ..lovely emotions ..how inspiring your words are

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Mesmerizing....is all I can say when I read this outstanding piece of work. This reminds me almost of a Shakespearean era melody, a song of spiritual longing.

"Tonight, my exodus ends
At the gates of Eden I stand
And bow in humble gratitude
As I enter my promised land" ~ Very nice.

[Angel Baby]

Wow, another wonderful write, but coming from you I would never expect less. Keep inking the pages. I love how you entertain me. P.W.

[The DuchessPoet]

You, you YOU!!!
You are soooo gifted and i am HONORED that you think i can write!
What a treasure your compliments are to me!

This is sensational...
I would LOVE to perform it...
I am in awe.
You have a brilliant way with words!
Your words:
""Serenade me subtle songs
Whisper to my longing ears
Let love live this moment
Forget tomorrow and yesteryears""

WOW!!!

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Wow, what a glorious write. I love the image provoked by your use of exodus and Eden.... simply outstanding work again!