Forget

Forget

A Chapter by Wondering Mind

 

Forget with me future’s fickle fortune
And sad memories of days long gone by
Lets bed our worries on a soft sand dune
Blanket dreams with silky star-studded sky
My heart is your pillow and so my eye
 
Discard all that was to be deployed
For life is but moments to be enjoyed


© 2010 Wondering Mind


Author's Note

Wondering Mind
There is nothing like a night spent in the desert with the love of your life.

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this is beautiful. so hopeful & inspiring. "Forget with me future's fickle fortune And sad memories of days long gone by" this is most definitely something we all should do every once in a while. really the only thing that brings us pain is the past & the future, the present, this very moment, usually isn't all that bad. and the ending is brilliant. "Discard all that was to be deployed For life is but moments to be enjoyed" how often we forget. wonderful write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Loved the imagery of your beautiful word play

"Blanket dreams with silky star-studded sky"

spills like soft sultry sounds second to none. Simply stated spectacular. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is beautiful. so hopeful & inspiring. "Forget with me future's fickle fortune And sad memories of days long gone by" this is most definitely something we all should do every once in a while. really the only thing that brings us pain is the past & the future, the present, this very moment, usually isn't all that bad. and the ending is brilliant. "Discard all that was to be deployed For life is but moments to be enjoyed" how often we forget. wonderful write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it!!! simple, short, but it says a lot!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely message. The description in it is was beautiful.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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I have actually spent the night in the desert with someone special. Brought back the memories, thanks for sharing. P.W.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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