She (Has the Right)

 

Her waves caressed upon

The surface of my ocean

Her unseen undercurrents

Played with my deepest emotion

 

With her, words found meaning

A new language came to life

Vowels embraced the consonants

Composing words beautiful and rife

 

Her loving song became

The anthem of all my land

My sovereign Queen, is she

She has the right to demand

 

Now she reigns majestically

Her throne, I made my heart

Her Love rules my world

With beauty, grace and art

Reviews

[poet2angels (lynda)]

This is one of your best in my opinion
I love the metaphor , emotion and imagery within every line. A romantic at heart,
this one has me mesmerized form word one...
Beautiful!

Lynda

[Bee]

This is absolutely beautiful. I can't tell you enough times but you truly place words together perfectly. The metaphors are clever and the imagery is delicate and warm. You express your love for her in such a sweet, well-written way!

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This is a beautiful poem. I felt as though you were speaking not about a person, but about the art of poetry.. within. Nice work!

[Frank Terino]

the muse of a poet's dream, this is beautifully surrendered and expressed from the depth of the heart,
I really enjoyed the messege and meaning, as well as the detailed epression. Very nicely done.

[Angel Baby]

Another favorite, truly enjoy reading your work. Going into my favorites. PW

[Aratma]

A handfull of metaphores flowing into one another. I can see where the "happily married" comes from :)

[poetforlife]

Wow, very powerful words and emotions. This is beautifully written. Thanks for sharing it.