She (Has the Right)

She (Has the Right)

A Chapter by Wondering Mind

 

Her waves caressed upon
The surface of my ocean
Her unseen undercurrents
Played with my deepest emotion
 
With her, words found meaning
A new language came to life
Vowels embraced the consonants
Composing words beautiful and rife
 
Her loving song became
The anthem of all my land
My sovereign Queen, is she
She has the right to demand
 
Now she reigns majestically
Her throne, I made my heart
Her Love rules my world
With beauty, grace and art


© 2010 Wondering Mind


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Now she reigns majestically
Her throne, I made my heart
Her Love rules my world
With beauty, grace and art

...what a beautiful stanza, isn't it? I just love this stanza cause in this poem, this last stanza really caught my feeling, I just can't help it, smiling while reading this..lovely

Posted 14 Years Ago


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he wrote an ode for her
with all his love and might
and someone read and said
"WM, your heart is amazingly bright"

Posted 14 Years Ago


mother nature; she has the right
beautiful expression of gratitude and acknowledgement

Posted 14 Years Ago


oh, this is wonderful . . . you've been around all this time and how did I never find you before?

Posted 14 Years Ago


Romance...it will always pull me! From those sweet elderly couples walking still holding hands to young children playing and building castles in the sands...

If you have a chance glance at Seven Veils and let me know what you think!

Posted 15 Years Ago


outstanding n lovely write, the words just flow from your mind to the page with elegance.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Such a beautiful sentiment of love and devotion, and romantic but with passion of the heart and will!
Your soverign queen is blessed indeed! May you always feel the romance of your heart....her throne!
Lovely!
Sheila

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is a very beautiful and romantic poem, Love it!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

How beautifully constructed. A love affair between letters to form language and indeed she has the right to speak. To shout her message and make it clear. This is quite well written and truly an enjoyable verse. Well done. ~Pamela

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a very romantic write enjoyed this.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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