Fish and Chips

 

Bullets paint blood scenes

News paper wraps fish and chips

Peace cries agony

Reviews

[Renée]

Well it certainly wasn't what I expected...but it sure makes one think ..Sometimes I wish I understood, but I realize if I understood...I would be one of them...
So my voice and tears will join the cry of Peace..Always..pounding again the ground in rhythm with All my brothers and sisters of this world...

[Gandré]

this is a pretty thought.
we need more compassion in this world.
indeed.

[just is]

such a wonderful Haiku, I wish I could write them, love reading them though.

[Chemistry]

In your bio you said that english was not your first language.
Poetry was your first language
one that so many have lost.

[Angel Baby]

Another amazing write you have penned in so few words, shows true talent. Keep writing, I love the way your writes move me. PW

[Bee]

You barely said a thing at all, yet I think it's more powerful that way. It's real, blunt, and so much more than just three lines.

[Frank Terino]

I really like this poem because it's set in abstraction, flows with a deeper meaning, reminds me of reality and life itself, particularly like the way the ideas come together, keep up the great work.