Speak to Me

 

Speak to me

   in a language new,

        in words virgin;

                         unheard,

                               unread,

                                   unspoken before.

Dive deep with me

              into dangers divine;

                   sweet sensual currents

                                 of Love’s luscious core.

 

 

Lay with me,

        forever will be my embrace,

                          and always will be my heart.

          Silence Time

                         and fill this space.

            I yearn,

            I long,

                          for your waves

                                    to caress my lonely shores.

Author's Note

Trust me to misspell lonely...

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

hey that was nice ,nice images ,tender words..
Speak to me
in a language new,
in words virgin;
Dive deep with me
into dangers divine;
Lay with me
Forever will be my embrace,
and always will be my heart.
I yearn,
I long,
for your waves
to caress my lonley shore
what wonderful words,i really this ,how nice

[JelliFyshKissUs]

Nothing was misspelled misused or misinterpreted. You speak the language of true love without a hitch. I hope I speak that language with the fluency my lover can understand and embrace. Sublime.

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. wow ... this is rather spectacular ... it is like a symphony ... i can hear the flute very prominently ... but i hear violins too ... the arrangement is simply magnificent ... and of course, alliteration is your magic wand ...

beautiful

[Hanan_Maliah]

oh my friend, the words that wrote have stoked a fire within a soul recently found cold...I so enjoyed the way you choose to place your words as if to caress and embrace...a holding in its self! Thank you for allowing us your reader's the warmth that flows from you! I came back to read it yet again...

[Ahmad Alhour]

Very good interpretation of well formed images...

"Dive deep with me
into dangers divine;
sweet sensual currents
of Love's luscious core."
I like that verse!

Keep up the good stuff!

[Hanan_Maliah]

I think you have just skillfully flirted with my mind...how very beautiful! Words chosen with intent, perfect aim...much like that of cupid's arrow! I do hope to read more of you and guess I'll have my cup of tea with you for company this evening!

[bluessadmood]

i had a friend in college..she used to like me and i too..she was so shy and me too..
i really dont know but these words reminded me of her ..off course that was time ago
when i used to come near ..everything changed ..my face ..her color..the sun rays became cold
and a breeze gently crossed our face,we tried to talk..but the words were choked,the eyes stole a glance here and there
we both really did sweat a lot..my heart really ached from beating so fast..i just wanted to move away ..just could not bear all the emotions ..then..sorry just my mind wondered away ..
oh my love..speak to me..let me hear those words.so divine..how my heart long to hear your voice
its different from time to time ..never the same
come dive deep with me ..lets explore those wonders of love..lets take our hide from prying eyes
i want to feel those sensual currents that only you could create..all over me..its aches but i love that you do it
lay with me in my embrace..how warm ..safe i feel in that lovely bosom of yours..my haven
let all sounds clear but your voice is all i hear..your surroundings is all the space where i want to be
surround me ..take all over me and around me..like a seige i would love to be
how i long for your presence..you surely took hold ..real hold of me
what a romantic write..it made me sail away really away ..wonderful

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This is very lovely. Lonely is misspelled. This reminds me of a lot of different poems that echo this same idea, a new language to express the inexpressible. We all aspire to hear those divine strains of poetry in our minds until they spill overflowing from our lips. Beautifully done.

[The DuchessPoet]

You've spoken to my treasure enough to beckon my heart to stop and listen!

This is absolutely SENSATIONAL!

[Michael X]

this poem reflects your talent for form and you have a knack for cascading design
dreamily envisioned in ode fashion, and captivates the reader, to see other worlds in words
you have that here