Majestic

 

Majestic is your love to me;

                 A Queen, you conquered my heart.

With all my will I surrendered

                    And vowed we’ll never part

 

You outshined the little stars

                      Brighter than a royal moon

And dominated my skies

                      Like the desert sun at noon

 

Loyal is your noble heart

                     To no other did it sway

And only to my tides

                Have your shores been a bay

 

Your love roots deep within

                      Patient like a date-palm tree

And in your Garden of Eden

                     My soul rejoices free

Reviews

[Daniel]

"Loyal is your noble heart/To no other did it sway/And only to my tides/ Have your shores been a bay"

These lines really stook out to me. They're so truthful and show how much the other person cares for you in order not to "sway" as you said. Because now-a-days, it seems that most people don't really care for 'love' anymore, they just want marriage or a relationship.

Great piece!

[Janice Scott]

This is a beautiful tribut to the one you love! Excellently written as well.

[Wicked]

This is ever so beautiful

[poet2angels (lynda)]

Beautiful! and soooooo romantic!

Such a classic love poem this is...So enchanting and lovely!
This is breathtaking my friend...
a joy to read and savor these words
Lynda