Perchance

My goodbye

 

Though fate forced fortune to falter

And forever’s fire fade and subdue

 

Perchance past promise now departed

Breathes love’s lilies and lives anew

 

Though now your supple heart, it sways

To sweet serenades of someone new

 

No heavy hatred burdens my heart

And with well wishes I say adieu

 

May your meadows be forever green

Ardent sun shines your skies blue

 

May your spirit for always dance with joy

And true love your heart accrue

Reviews

[M. Amphet Salt]

Very beautiful and positive. Good-byes are sometimes not so easy, but ironically this one does very well in saying I love you but I quess it wasn't supposed to be and I wish you the best.

The imagery is outstanding.
"May your meadows be forever green
Ardent sun shines your skies blue"

As well as the all the metaphors within in the prose. Speaks true to the heart and relatable in every way that is natural and acceptable.

[poetforlife]

What a great way to say goodbye. I love the sweet rocking of the words. Very expressive and still shows great love for the one leaving. Thank you for sharing it with us.

[poet2angels (lynda)]

This is beautiful...The alliteration is perfect .
It makes the poem flow with such beauty carrying
the sound like soft sigh in the breeze, sigh~
The emotion is present from beginning to end making this
such a breathtaking piece...I love it

Lynda

[Angel Baby]

The imagery is this write , superb....such a beautiful and postive write. found it a pleasure to read. Goodbyes are never easy, but what we learn from them can help us grow as we move on. Well Done!!