Moments in Time ( We Are)

An Etheree- Inspired by the song " Dust in The Wind"- Kansas

dreams,         
a thought,        
emotions,       
a passing whim,      
someone's memory,     
body, mind, and spirit.    
creations of The Artist's Hand   
a small drop in life's deep ocean  
a grain of sand in vast desert land 
and sadly we are mere moments in time

Reviews

[poet2angels (lynda)]

The Etheree is such a beautiful form...
Many poets lose the emotion when writing in form poetry, but this is written and expressed with such beauty and emotion...losing nothing but gaining even more beauty in the form...
Excellent

Lynda

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"creations of The Artist's Hand
a small drop in life's deep ocean
a grain of sand in vast desert land
and sadly we are mere moments in time"

Sadly, I must disagree. For this poem is a pure treasure and something that will withstand "mere moments in time".

A beautiful poem.

[Legion]

Thus, we should toast each moment before it passes. A great piece. I love that song also. Kudos.