through eyes of curiosity

 

thoughts                                                                                                         

invade,                                                                                               

piercing my                                                                            

tranquillity                                                                  

coring the shelter                                                        

of my thick ignorance.                                               

doors once locked with rusted locks                        

open to virgin horizons                      

light shines bright on my dark drenched knowledge

I look through eyes of curiosity

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

Very special poem.

doors once locked with rusted locks
You might try secured in place of locked.
Of course it was easy to think of one word, you had
to think of all the rest.
Anything written with few words usually says more
than long drawn out stories.
My favorite !
---- Eagle Cruagh

[Corset]

I love the pic of the Lion on this, such wild savage creatures one second and in the next they are just huge playful cats. Love them myself, love to watch them on the discovery channel.

[Ed Hart]

ah, good

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. oh, what an etheree ... and what a choice of topic ... the two blend and complement each other magically ... every word is perfect ... you unravel well ... and what you demonstrate is sheer excellence in thinking ... there is much too much to learnt from you and your astounding humility ... thank you, WM ... you remain one of my favourite rocket launchers ... :) ...

[JelliFyshKissUs]

Sometimes curiosity isn't so insightful. Loved, loved, loved the imagery behind letting go of stubbornness and humbly learning. Very creative, Mind of Wonders. Very creative, indeed.

[Angel Baby]

Nice write, for so few words they say so much. Well Done!

[Tai-San]

This is good. even with the lack of words through each stanza, it's still very good.