wondering minds

an essence for the coming winds. 2 lines with six syllabeles each having both internal and ending rhyme

Thoughts flow; minds in wonder.

Winds blow; trees surrender.

Author's Note

My opening write in here.

Reviews

[J.Black]

Well written. I liked this,

[Angel Baby]

Intriguing poem had me thinking, visualizing, mind wondering....SUPERB write. Enjoyed very much. Thanks for sharing.

[Lena M. P.]

I like your process. Also reminds me of thoughts drifting in the fall like the leaves. I liked how so few words started me visualizing. Well written.

[Michael X]

I like this, the idea, the form is cool, the comparision between thought
and winds blowing, how mind wonders, that a great parallel, intriguing.