wondering minds

an essence for the coming winds. 2 lines with six syllabeles each having both internal and ending rhyme

Thoughts flow; minds in wonder.

Winds blow; trees surrender.

Author's Note

My opening write in here.

Reviews

[Corset]

Look at that, structured poems, wow and rhyming, i'm impressed :) very nice.

[Emily B]

your wondering mind is a beautiful gift

[Liza]

opening your mind to be present to the gift of the present...congrats :)

[.]

. ahhhh ... beautiful beyond measure ...

your mind is a treasure
and when you wonder
we wonder with you
and when you saunter
in the alleys
of your thoughts
we follow you around
and when you conclude
we conclude
a wondering mind
is god's gift
to mankind
and so are you

[nono]

nicely done oh how i wish it would have continued but for something so short your voiced something most beautiful!

[Ahmad Alhour]

Adorable piece, meaningful and deep...

[emmajoy]

A painting in words; your words collide yet form concise shape and beauty.

[JohnL]

Reminder of an old song??? Thoughts flow - winds blow, ergo! The answer is blowing in the wind.
Lovely bijou poem. Don't have to think too hard but it conjures up 'pensive days enjoying gentle summer breezes'.

John

[poet2angels (lynda)]

I love this....
SO much said in so few words...Very pretty !

Lynda

[C.L. Wilson]

short poems can be the best. They leave so much for us to translate and that helps us find your true self. thank you for making such a poem. I see thoughts as the wind and the tree as our will.