You

and still not answered

more eager exploration
than a practiced ritual

 

though it is a kiss or two away
from worship

or so it seems

each time a different journey

 

a deep discovery of those spots
that may give me answers
to the universal question

 

that is you

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

very earthy, sensual and poignant. must feel nice to have someone feels this way about you. whoever it is is a lucky person for having someone so mindful of you.

[Corset]

she /he probably doesn't even have the answers, I love that line "though it is a kiss or two away
from worship
or so it seems
each time a different journey
ah, love as God energy I thinks, worship, cool, I love this one :)

[Helen Crutchett]

Oh just perfectly lovely W.M. Much enjoyed....write on oh Bard!

[Wondering Mind]

Hardly a bard, my friend, but thank you :)

[ForTheWorld]

how sweet..it's nice, actually, beautiful and romantically written

[Wondering Mind]

thank you, princess. I hope all is well with you :)

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such a wonderful read

[Wondering Mind]

Thank you :)

[Ed Hart]

you two too

[Wondering Mind]

I know you take it personal when "you" is mentioned...Thank you :)

[icaros13]

"...though it is a kiss or two away; from worship; or so it seems" This makes me reminisce the beauty of new love and the excitement of loving and learning each other. In those moments, it does seem as if the mysteries of life can be answered by the sheer force of passion. Relish it, friend, relish it...

[Wondering Mind]

Thanks, my friend...I do..

[Lily Mae]

The joy and bliss that comes from the excitement of a different journey taken each time.. with discovery unveiling the universal question.. is divine...in so many ways so many reasons.. :)

[Wondering Mind]

The most exciting about it all is that the question remains unsolved...Thank you for reading, Lily :)

[Lily Mae]

I like that.. the never ending exploration..xo

[Pax]

sweet words..

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God bless the inspiration of this work of art :) She's done good work of you!

[Wondering Mind]

God bless you, lynn. Thank you!