Same But Different

Go figure, even 2 made it, but the odd one failed the prime test

wholly not holy
I'm sure

but I am whole
both body and soul

 

not a sum-one
of parts
but the product of a past
a present in a present
exponent of an eager future

 

myself
more than I and me

 

one
of many same ones

but one day
a different memory

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

very like eastern philosophy. i feel like i have a been a completely different person in each phase of my life that i question who am i today. i guess you have to live in the present moment because the past no longer exist and the future doesn't exist yet and we should let us feel the way we feel about ourselves as we do we do now. i'm just expostulating out loud. this is a very thought-provoking poem to me.

[Pax]

another deep poem, i see 3 different views but all the same just different ways i think.. ;)

[EileenMarie]

This is beautiful. So inspirational!!! Great job!

[Satire69]

i like it

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Art! That's what this is. The poem and the poet :)

[Corset]

Love the first stanza, this sounds like a very qualified self analysis, where you came out on top, two out of three isn't bad is it?

[demureminds]

I love this. It makes you think a little as you consume the words, yet it holds a nice simple message. The flow of this poem is also quite phenomenal. Great write! (:

[Sam Gregory]

Simple but very effective, well structured too. keep it up, ur message came across well