Firstborn

not the digital agency

though soft and tender
the heart refuses
to be conquered

but may
in strong will surrender

 

mine
I give in essence
and will not assume yours

 

instead
like an expecting mother
I lovingly wait
for my firstborn

 

Reviews

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Stunning! Absolutely stunning!

[Renée]

Strong & tender
Freewill........
the greatest of these is Love...

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is so Sweet!...though strong willed, in essence surrendering to a soft and tender heart comes natural...especially firstborn. Beautiful!

[Sami Khalil]

The heart refuses to be conquered
but may
Well penned.

[Emily B]

so beautiful

[Wondering Mind]

in the eyes of the beholder :)

[Emily B]

the corinthians tells us: Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It does not dishonor others, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps no record of wrongs. Love does not delight in evil but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres.

I like the way you've stated it though, so softly and tenderly

[Wondering Mind]

Thank you Emily...The closest that came to mind to the purity of Love which you have mentioned was that of a mother, even if she is still a mother to be.

[Mockingbird]

i guess your love must grow into one another which takes patience and nurturing. it is selfless to say 'i give in essence and will not assume yours.'

[Corset]

You know, I've read this over several times, and I have come to the conclusion that this is quite beautiful actually.

[Wondering Mind]

Thanks...I didn't want to put on too much make up :)

[Sam Gregory]

Beautifully written, I like the structure and flow of this one :)