My Dear Alice

its kinda like a version of alice in wonderland but its more about what I want =/

Whats so great about reality

Everything is bland

Nothing excitings in it

My dear Alice...

Your curiousity will be your demise

She falls into her imagination

Frightened and unsure

Where am I?

Everything has changed

Sweet words draw her further in

My dear Alice...

Lost and curious

Following the sweet words

Slowely leading you to madness

Time clicks slowely away

Alice lost in the flowers garden

Tempted by their lucious scents

They whisper sweet promises

Alice, my dear Alice

You're lost in wonderland

Scared and confused

She cries out for reality

Something simple and plane

Where to go...

How to escape from this crazy place

Arrows point all over

Telling her this way

Then telling her that

Which way is the path to home

My dear Alice...

Follow the way your heart leads

Don't be held back

Don't listen to their tempting words

Trust yourself my dear Alice

And you will find your way home.

My dear Alice....

Please...

Don't give up.

Reviews

[Sean M. Addams]

liked this alot a very creative piece... the detail and concept of this piece were done well you should check out my lewis carroll contest this piece would be perfect...

[crow]

I love it print me off a copy, its one of my favorites.

[Rima]

This interesting...
Anyway, I like it, great job!

[Jae]

this is kinda like my poem "Porcelain." its about alice in wonderland, but with a horrific twist. heehee

this poem was very well written and creative.

we must look into ourselves for the true answer we desire.

~Rem

[Sabrina]

I've always loved Alice in wonderland.
Creative ideas there.