Suicidal thoughts

Suicidal thoughts

A Poem by Lunar Pup

I'm sorry to tell you this my love

You don't get to see the pain that you have put me through

I'll hide it from you behind glass walls

While inside everything falls

 

Broken and depressed

This is the state you have left me in

Suicidal thoughts keep me trapped in snow

But I hide every single woe

 

Crystals fall from saphires

Rubies fall from ivory

So much pain...

How am I suposed to remain sane?

 

Suicidal thoughts trace their hands along cold flesh

Teasing the simple minded

I hide my pain that you have caused me, behind glass walls

Where inside it all falls.

 

 

 

© 2009 Lunar Pup


Author's Note

Lunar Pup
I don't know if anyone will get this...

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i may not understand your feelings behind this piece, but i do admire the way you wrote them down. i guess i would say that im a big fan of this kind of poetry. not merely about the suicidal thoughts, but the darkness and the pain you write about. hopefully the suicidal thoughts are none that you would act upon.

good piece.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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i may not understand your feelings behind this piece, but i do admire the way you wrote them down. i guess i would say that im a big fan of this kind of poetry. not merely about the suicidal thoughts, but the darkness and the pain you write about. hopefully the suicidal thoughts are none that you would act upon.

good piece.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Lunar Pup
Lunar Pup

Boone, IA



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I really only write poetry... but it helps me let out stress so i do it in my free time... i write about basically anything but it all has meaning to me... and i cant rhyme.... well actually im gettin.. more..

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A Poem by Lunar Pup