Silent Plea

I want to tell you how much I hate you my love

But all that seems to come out are sweet simple words

I can't understand why

But I still love you...

No matter what you seem to do...

 

It's hard to explain where I am

Because I can't feel any pain

And my heart has broken down

Tonight has been a horrid night

But it's just like any other fight.

 

Some ones hurt

While the other feels no pain

Isn't this the story of my life?

The tears fall on my behalf

While you just sit there and laugh...

 

You my love...

Have made it plain for me to see...

That maybe...

We're simply not ment to be...

My love... Listen to my silent plea...

Author's Note

short poem that i wrote while half asleep... don't really know if it's good or not but I couldn't fall asleep because it kept echoing in my head -_-

Reviews

[Donovan "Grey Wolf" Go..]

its good and I can understand what its saying I went threw the same thing and it took me till last night to relize that maybe me and her wern't ment for eachother. It was actualy kinda funny because I said we would just be friends after we broke up but my feelings stayed and she started gooing with this guy and since i was her new best friend I had to give her advice on how to fix there relationship after a fight they had.Well I didnt have to but I did what I would have wanted her to do for me and there back togather so mylife goes on

[BLACKCRUSH]

I think this piece says it all , in relationships someone is always the one who is getting hurt while the other one seems to be detached from the situation. There is a real deep message in this write , its heartbreaking to know that alot of people will definitely relate to this situation including myself.You really struck a nerve with this one , great job.

[Suki]

wow i like this A LOT... i couldnt think of a better way of expressing this feeling, you wrote it wonderfully, im adding it to my favorites. and hey maybe you should write half-asleep more often lol ; )

[jessfoundwonder]

I liked this one. completely true, everything in it seems like i've felt it or thought about it a million times, but you wrote it. thanks! haha

[TheKaylaPup]

*sigh* It's really good for you being half asleep. So, who'd this one about?