Crimson Rain

Crimson Rain

A Poem by Lunar Pup

Let me scream out to the world

Let them all see my pain

Can't you see my heart tearing apart?

Let it fall down like rain.


Does anyone care enough to tell me it's okay

That I shouldn't hurt like I do?

Why can't you see what this pain does to me?

What was I to you?

 

I can't belive what you said

I hate this all so much...

I'll hide behind a fake smile

Because no would ever be my crutch

 

So I'll hide my crimson tears

No one will ever see this pain

Rather in my simple bleak words

My heart is now rain

 

Let me reside in this moment of hatred my love

I know you wont heal me this time

I hate this...

Much like I hate this poem and every single rhyme

 

I only wanted happiness

But my heart was thrown down

Just like always

Let my love drown

 

My love...

Thank you...

For this horrid pain....

Let me take this out in crimson rain...

 

© 2009 Lunar Pup


Author's Note

Lunar Pup
okay... this is what happens to me when I get really upset and I find out things that I don't want to find out and then I get really upset =/

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I can so relate on this one as well. I like the line "I hide behind a fake smile because no would ever be my crutch" I actually have a poem that deals with hiding behind mask of happiness while dieing inch by inch within. So far I am really feeling you work.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on August 7, 2009

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Lunar Pup
Lunar Pup

Boone, IA



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I really only write poetry... but it helps me let out stress so i do it in my free time... i write about basically anything but it all has meaning to me... and i cant rhyme.... well actually im gettin.. more..

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A Poem by Lunar Pup