Dead Dove

Have you ever felt as if life itself has stopped?

That every single tear you've shed has no become meaningless?

Every single slash on your body was for joy and nothing else?

Have you ever seen pain through another persons eyes?

Can't you hear their cold sighs?

 

Who are we in this bleak place?

Where everything seems so small

And no one can feel...

These hallow halls

Where every single worry falls....

 

The moonlight on the sun

The world turned upside down...

What is life  anymore?

Where no one can hear your silent cries

And everyone lies...

 

What is this to you my love?

Because I can't see through the looking glass anymore

My heart has been blinded by the pain you've caused me...

Show me the love I've always craved

The one way that I can be saved...

 

My world stops because of what you have done to me...

My life seems so meaningless...

Every single scar now reminds me of how much hate I have...

You can't hear my cries

You're blinded by all their lies...

 

Who am I to you my love...

Because in this bleak world...

I'm nothing but a dead dove.

Reviews

[Donovan "Grey Wolf" Go..]

i dont think u are weird u just say what most people are to afraid to say because they are scared what people will think. I like it. And I also think that I am somethin like the dove u describe because without love are we even alive or are we like the dead dove. your a really good poet.

[TheKaylaPup]

You my dear friend are a good poet, and a person with issues. Are you sure your gonna be alright? I worry.. *sigh* Good poem tho as usual

[Nish Nish the Fish]

i think the first few stanzas of this poem is a good description of humanity itself,
i like how you've written this, with all rhetorical questions, they make your poem "interactive"
and by that i mean, the reader answers these questions as they go, thus making the poem all the more thought-provoking.
very well done, i think!
:)