Now torn Apart

this is something I wrote because I hate when people use other peoples poems and claim them as their own.

The black skies

Catches all their lies

Their confused simple minds

What is there for them to find?

 

A black hallow heart

And a simple art

Simple meaningless lines

Which they can't even define.

 

Watch as the beauty of the art

Now turned torn apart

By all the false rhymes in the world

Now twisted and curled

 

The black skies

Catches all their lies

Their confused simple minds

What is there for them to find?

 

Reviews

[TheKaylaPup]

Nice poem. I hate it when people steal art too. Like seriously, when you put time, work, and emotion into a poem and someone copies it as their own... *rants for a while* : )

[BLACKCRUSH]

Its a shame when people have to steal other peoples writing.There lack of creativity or laziness really offends me because when you take the time to work hard on a piece and then to have someone copy you its just a shame. I likes the way you used the imagery of "Black skies", I think that was a perfect way to describe how simple minded theses people are and how they cant hide there lies.This piece was creative and important, I hope more people read it. Great Job!

[Aekmy]

This makes so much sense! Wonderful poem. I, too, do not appreciate it when people still art work. Great poem.

-Mary

[DC Gentleman]

I will NEVER look st plagirism the same way again. I love the imagery of "black skies" showing how shallow the actions of those people are..

Great work..