Ensnare My Heart

Ensnare my heart in crimson bound chains

Claim me as your own

And never let me go

Love me in a way I've never known...

 

You are my everything

I am completly yours

Love me forever

I am the one who adores (you)

 

Hold me tight

My midnight love

Show me what happines is like

Let me be your dove...

 

Crimson stained tears fall

Please don't let me go

Let me be your one and only

Because I love you so...

 

Ensnare my heart in crimson bound chains

Claim me as your own

And never let go

Love me in a way I've never known...

Reviews

[BLACKCRUSH]

This speaks to me on so many levels.
" Hold me tight

My midnight love

Show me what happines is like

Let me be your dove"
You can almost hear the melody in this poem, it would be a beautiful song. This is a very romantic piece and I really enjoyed reading it,from start to finish it was wonderful.

[Jemma]

I think this would go great in a song.
It just seems to flow through and have its own melody to it.
"Ensnare my heart in crimson bound chains"
was my fave line. Crimson bound chains is such beautiful wording.
Great write.

[K.D.Storm]

I like the way you reach out to embrace that unseen lover who makes your heart beat. It's shows a picture of a dark love felt deeper and with more passion than the bubble gum love that seems so trendy these days. Mean no foundation and no chance of progressing pass anything more than a memory. This is an awesome write. Very heart felt and honest.

[V. Lucien Maier]

Nicely done. Its funny and doubt you meant it this way but this poem reminds me a great of SUKI STACKHOUSE in TRUE BLOOD. Her story would fit this poem perfectly. It is written very nicely, and pulls the reader right through nicely put together.