Wolf of Crimson Tears part 2

This is about how even when the thing you want most is offered you sometimes realize it wasn't worth wanting at all

The echos of my barren heart,

Realesed in a lunar tune,

The silence is broken

Snow falls from the sky,

casting walls of white...

Where is my home...

The pack I ran froom to be with the crow...

Blood tinged fur and black eyes...

The horrors of your past were shown to me and I could never heal you...

A familiar howl pierces the sky,

The love I was offered so long ago...

Now has come to save me...

But he now has someone else...

She follows queitly behind him...

I stare at them then run off into the bloodstained hills that i finally realised are my home.

Author's Note

punctuation is kinda bad... and its not as long as the other wolf of crimson tears poem.... the details are sketchy too >.<

Reviews

[TheKaylaPup]

I like it, but I think you should add more to it.