The Ultimate Sacrifice

As he dates someone he shuts down all feelings for others

He never is attracted to anyother when he dates

He cant like anyone elts

His emotions are under his full control

If he leave someone he shuts down all feeling towards  them

He does this becuse he cant handle the stress

He does this so he wont go insane

In doing this there is nothing left for that person

He does give second chances because of this

He does this under is own fee will

In doing this the only thing that gets hurt is the one thing he shouldn't

It is killing his heart

Its distroying it

But he doesn't care for it

This is the ultmate sacrifice

His heart

 

Reviews

[Bud]

Amazing! Only one heart, one share, one ultimate sacrifice...so many pieces. And so the saga continues. Bravo! I enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing.

[Wolffe]

He cant like anyone elts = (Can't.) He does this so he wont go insane = (Won't ) distroying = (Destroying)

Overall this poem is really good. Good vocabulary and narrative that made this poem stand out. My comments above are only suggestions. Thanks for sharing this.

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very nicley written.... but u dont give second chances and idt u shut down all ur pain and emtotions becuase i believe that u just gave them all to me >.<