little poems

I wrote this because I love someone

I am too lazy to wash myself
and you never cared where the
hair grew on my body, 

so I left it there.

Reviews

[GTVile]

In plain terms, this is very blunt. But in my interpretation of it, I think it goes much deeper. Not being familiar with the circumstances (I think I've said that about all of your pieces; cryptic writer) I would have to say that I think its got a feel of willingness to give one's self entirely. So perhaps it's totally devotional. On the contrary, it could be perceived as a reaction to a slight. I'm going to go with the first interpretation though, given what you wrote in the caption. Based off that interpretation, I think it's sweet but more importantly genuine. That warrants more in the end anyway. Good job as always.

[Dark Twain]

Thats disgusting LOL

[celyn]

i always love your writing.
i would review it more if i could think of something worthy to say...
other than that you are brilliant.

[Steve]

This one made me smile/blush! And that takes a lot!

[Collect-Eye]

it reads like a click from the radiator. I only mean that subjectively cause it could only be written the way.

sometimes this is way too personal to presume interaction, but I am hoping I've tread carefully enough, because I see you have.