People are Gone

I forget

Head Pounding
a pebble is hopeful
to run
down the river
dark
and stained with blood.

Instrumental
love making
of hormonal
liars and blank-faced
and moaning.

Fellow Blaming
urchins
are in my hair
ice soaked
soul
flown everywhere.

Photographed
Surprised
Recorded
Caught off guard,
the puzzles fold
and fall apart.

A Building Collapses
and people
fall down.
People are Gone.

People are Gone
and it is killing the living
it is paling the faces
of ones
who aren't smiling

The Evil
exploding is
feeding the ailments
of turmoil singing
in the family.

Melody Melting
people are gone,
don't forget it.

Reviews

[Isolophobe]

Photographed
Surprised
Recorded
Caught off guard,
the puzzles fold
and fall apart.

one of my favorite formation of words from you. the whole thing is really magnificent though, the words are strung together like they fell out of your head and landed where they belonged the whole time.

[Livenrite]

How is it you captured a feel of a moment with such few words?!? Well done! Thanks for sharing:)

[elephant]

f****n awsome!

[celyn]

What does it feel like to be such a talented poet?
Another brilliant write.
(I'm sorry my reviews usually aren't very helpful.. i'm finding it hard to be critical of your work because I think it is pretty much perfect as it is.)