weyoume

oh seedling

i'm sorry to rid of you,
oh the seedling inside.
a short stream of suction
allowing guilt to grow
where you will not.




you are me
and i feel so full of us
but i will selfishly break us
time to drain of remains
that is the creation, that is you
i love you
 

Author's Note

im sorry

Reviews

[Isolophobe]

"I feel so full of us"

Thats such a great line. i think it encompasses the entire poem here.

[Poeticpiers]

Sometimes it is for the best to do what must be done.
To feel guilt is natural but to give birth to an unwanted child os a greater sin

[John Destalo]

I think this is well spoken, what I feel from this is how amazing it is to achieve life for even a moment, the struggle is so significant and the odds are stacked against it that creating (giving life to) anything for any period of time is incredible and love should be granted to all life.