A beckoning can deform everyone

Alive around Amelia, An alligator allegedly ate asprin. along...adieu animal. Because bears break bodies, babies balance by bending backwards,beautifully. Cory cant create certitude, clouds call cowardly, "clown!" Dont decipher, dream daises. dream demise. dance dreadfully. Ears elope, everyone engage! Flee fleas, free from fake fountains...from fixatives. Get going, graphic goons! Harriet holds halos, her hands help heckling hooligans. inane inamorata, if ill intentions inflict...it is isolation. Jezebel jinxed justice, January just jumbled...just jumped. kestrels kept kennelled, knavish kin-folk keep knick knacks. Lesser levels lead leprechauns, ladies, lunatics... Meltingpots move melodramatic memorandums never never-land now near newts...novas notice nothingness. octogenerians occupy orgies of off-the-wall OshKoshians people popping pain-killers paint paisley patterns, pleasantly practice pedophelia. pssst, playing Penny...pretty pre-teen.. quickie, quiet. raunchy, reckless, relapsing rogue. secretive sexuality surges serene Sara, sweet Sandra, scared Sally. tomorrow they try to talk. ugly ulcers, ultraconcervatives undermining us. very vigilant, various velveteen veiled varment. walkie-talkies waking Wesely, wearing women...wherever...whenever. x-rated xylophonists yell "yes!", you yea'say'ers... zaftig zealots zigzag.

Reviews

[Chris]

chuckling here... sense seems to be as we find it - behind our eyes. An interesting point would be noticing how the reader would change some of the words' tense and form to still fit the patterns but smooth the flow.

[wolfshrew]

I sometime feel a swift feeling of panic that I keep writing here that I did in high school, but it's a good look back.

[Chris]

Back then I made a language - then populated my mind with its speakers...

Our perceptions of the world influences our minds and we change too often without understanding the whys. Touching who we were gives each a pause to reflect what our nows might have been. Sort of wishing on a star I guess...

[Stephen Scaggs]

Took me awhile to see the pattern, even the title A B C D E, A Beckoning Can Deform Everyone. The method of how you wrote this poem is highly original and I hope to use this frame of poem for my own poem, if that's okay. I probably will wait on doing it for a later date. 10/10.

[Eagle Cruagh]

Clever , but so is Wolfshrew.

You leave me gasping.

Bright, talented, unusual .

Rated: 100 %

----- Eagle CRuagh

[Butterflymom]

This is a fun and creative piece! Great job, and thanks for sharing it here.

[Rainbow Rider]

Welcome to the Cafe. I must say this is totally different. I'm sorry to say I cheated, by the time I got to the 'J' line I had to skip down to see what you would come up with for X, Y and Z. Different, unusual, but very entertaining to perose.

[Mandi]

haha this was interesting and for some reason it made me laugh! (in a good way of course)

[Wolfie]

Oh oh oh! I really like it I mean it to!
Not kidding alot of my writings are like this:D