She Means Everything

She Means Everything

A Poem by Franklin...
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Yes, even I fell victim to writing a sappy love poem at one point.

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She means everything to me
Makes me everything I want to be
Holds my heart in her hands
The only one who understands

I couldn't rightly say
If I took every day
How she makes me feel
Makes all the old wounds heal

Her eyes devour my heart
Her voice heralds a new start
Facing life side by side
My Angel, my Love, my Bride

I don't know her name
Or from whence she came
I don't know her face
Or where she found such grace

Or even if we ever shall meet
Before my heart gives its final beat
But I'll wait for her through eternity
She means everything to me.

© 2010 Franklin...


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this would make a great song

Posted 14 Years Ago


....an afterthought, it reads like a song. Do you write lyrics? you should.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh my. by now, you've probably have her safe and sound in your arms. good for you. Good for her. Beautiful sentiments!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i didn't read it. I sang along. =D

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wonderful poem I loved it

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very romantic and sweet:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great piece of art, romantic simple and well-written, good flow, great work on the rhyme, the idea of loving someone who doesn't exist moreover unknown was presented in a wonderful way.
well done

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

gorgeous poem, simple but yet captivating. Good work, :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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