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     Casey raced through the halls, trying to get to class. While she was running, she passed by a group of popular girls. She looked at them, instead of looking in front of her, and she collided with a boy, dropping all her supplies. The girls laughed and made fun of the two, calling them names. Casey tried to not notice, but after a while of laughing, she could take it no longer, and stood up and attacked them. Suddenly she noticed she had to get to class..... fast. She grabbed her supplies and heded down the stairway to the bottom floor, which would take a while to get to because she was on the top of the four stories of the middle school. We really need to get elavators.... she thought as she jumped down the last steps. from ther she ran to her class, and luckily slid into her seat  as soon as class started.

     The only good thing about this class was the fact that this was the class she and her friends, Jodie and Michael, were in it together. They mainly just passed notes while the teacher would write a math problem on the board.Casey had noticed that Jodie had been staring at a boy most of the class. He was a new boy, named Cody. He looked nice, but many times if a boy is cool, he's popular. Casey did not pass popular people off aas nice people, acording to today. She looked back at the board, and the teacher wasn't there. Instead he was staring over her shoulder. "Notes," he growled, "That will be detention tonight. You too, Michael and Jodie.

Reviews

[Monday Parker]

Its a good start. I would suggest putting some more description in there, like instead of saying the poplar girls called her names, say what they called her. You want to show the story not tell it. Just some thoughts. Keep up the good work