Pride

A father filled with hatred, malice, and pride does the unthinkable.

There is blood on the walls. There is a girl lying on the floor, her head a few inches away from her body. There is a man standing, looking down at her. Pride fills his face. The girl's oak brown hair matches the man's hair. She also inherited  his blue eyes. But her eyes are lifeless while his are alive. And hungry.

"Daddy!"

The sound of his daughter screaming still echoes in his ears. He closes his eyes and re-lives the torture.

His daughter. His knife.The knife stabbed the girl.Her screams filled his ears."DADDY! DADDY! HELP ME!" He laughed at her cries. 

"Daddy isn't here anymore." He said, grinning.

"Honey, I'm home!"

The man opens his eyes, interrupted from the memory. He hears his wife walking about downstairs. He looks around at his daughters room. The he looks at his daughter. Her eyes had seemed to twitch. He leaned in closer. Nothing.

The man stood straight. He walked to the window and looked down at the front yard. The day was bright. Birds sang to each other. The grass glistened with the sunlight.

"Honey I brought Pizza. Maybelle? David?"

The man listens as his wife ascends the stairs. He grabs the knife he had dropped and runs to the window. He opens the window and sits on the windowsill.

"Maybelle there's Piz-" The wife looks at her daughters corpse once she opened the door. She looks up and see's her husband. Blood on him. A knife in his hands. She screams a shrill cry.

David jumps down and runs into his car. He takes the key from his pocket and starts the engine. He starts driving away. As he starts driving, he hears sirens. He smiles to himself. They will never catch him alive.

As he gets on a bridge, he swerves his car sideways. The car plummets into the water. Sinking. Sinking. David smiles. Water suddenly started filling his lungs. His heart slows down. It stops. A few minutes later he is found. The police take his body from the water. David died with a smile. A cruel, cold smile.

Author's Note

This is just a short story I wrote a while ago, I think it's kinda crappy, but give me your insight.

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[PSYCHO-LOVE]

HOW THATS SOME CAUGTY STUFF YOU WORTE I WA S SO IN TO IT. IT WAS A little CREEPY AT FRIST BUT THEN SUSPENSEFUL. {*_*}