winter wind

a winter chill blows the the fur of the wolf

the fallen leaves of fall blow around in the wind

the animals of summer hide in there burrows

as the frost eats up the last of summers warmth

 

 the lake frozen from lunas breath

animals huddle together to excape the cold

animals scarce to hunt in the midday

kill and survive is the only thought going in there minds

 

howls erupt from the packs of wolves through out the land

as they begain there hunt for the nights meal

 rabbits run and hide to the safety of bushes

from the dens the animals shiver out of fear

Reviews

[Murisaka]

one of my favorits youve done so far, is this an older one ive already read from you Nelson? it feels familure to me.

[Sylo's Rose]

you need to watch your spelling and pounctuation. But its very good

[Letemdangle]

Nice imagery. Very natural sounding.